Countryside Road Comments
The road to my village
Is donned with
Lines of plants and trees,
Names of some I know
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Countryside road is muddy But clean and green....I love the expression because I hail from a village! Beautifully penned! (10)
Wisdom! ! With the muse of the Village. Thanks for sharing.
Beauty flows in every line.The nature around the village road has been vividly portrayed in this poem. When the East-wind blow, Tree trunks sway Like elephant trunks, Rhythm with the Descending raindrops, Dripping from each tip Of the leaflets As if a teenager Soaking her hair beads In her first monsoon rain, out of enigmatic love-pain.
Village ends and starts with many coconut trees and scenic beauty of village motivates mind. The scenic beauty of this village and road is beautifully drawn in this poem in imagery. An interesting sharing is done here...10
I love how your poem illustrates the road so well! It was beautiful! ! !
dear poet, delighted to know that you liked my description of native road.Infact, the road connecting National Highway to my native place in Odisha, a coastal district on Bay of Bengal side, was devastated during supercyclone in 1999 and vegetation in all forms perished.but earth rejuvenated...Thank you for appreciting the poem.
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7/29/2025 2:39:03 AM # 1.0.0
The visionary impact of flow of your words is something to admire. Well conceived and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.