Saturday, March 14, 2015

Country, People, Pride And Feeling Comments

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I'm so Proud of my People,
The way they have evolved,
A Country huge, that showed the world,
You can be free and bold,
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Sandra Feldman
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Daniel Brick 18 March 2015

Your poem makes as persuasive a case for that particular pride called PATRIOTISM as I can imagine. It's really a vexed question. No matter how many things you list, your list will never be complete - there's always some fact lurking in the back of someone's mind, or a history book, or the Congressional Records, something which will disrupt the list. So, a poem is particularly well-suited to address for vexed questions, and your poem will give a unified voice to those who see the American Experiment in Democracy as noble and worthy of its future.

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Savita Tyagi 16 March 2015

Lovely poem written with heartfelt emotions. God bless this wonderful country of ours.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2015

My country of you I am impressed. Very pleasing and deeply patriotic as well as affectionate poem shared really.

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