Country Mouse Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Country Mouse

Rating: 5.0


Oh, precious little mouse. How I hope you find
your dream house. Out and about the meadows and
the hay, may you ever so joyfully play. And when
the winter starts, to turns your way. Ever so
many, berries, seeds, twigs, and leaves may you
save. And may sunshine, find your days. And when
the skies turn black and gray. Forever may your
house, be warm and safe! ..

Saturday, September 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,mouse,nature,safety
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For the little field mouse I found inside, that wanted out.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 09 September 2018

A sweet, sensitive poem. Except if you are a cat...

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Isadora Quagmire 01 June 2025

What a sweet and warm poem! Grandly written!

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Captain Cur 19 September 2018

All life is precious and all just trying to survive. A sweet and amusing poem, but also a serious message of our need to respect and love all life, even a little field mouse, that inhabit our beautiful world.

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Rebecca Navarre 22 September 2018

Thank you! .. Captain Cur, For such a beautifully kind and thoughtful reply! .. Your poetry holds such depth and beauty! .. That's ever so powerful and ever so moving! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

God has created many creatures to enjoy their lives.and mouse is one of them. You have a mind of judgement that you have inscribed in favour of mice. A beautiful poem nicely executed. I rate it 10 from ten but couldn't post it.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 September 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For your very beautiful and kind reply! .. Your poetry so inspiring, the beauty you bring, to heart, mind, is worth cherishing! .. Thank you again! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Susan Williams 10 September 2018

We lived across the street from the desert- hence a continual visitation by field mice. They are cute but much cuter outside! ! ! Sweet write. Could be extended into a mouse tail - - I mean tale- - for children! ! ! ! A bunch of cute 10's! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 11 September 2018

Thank you! .. Susan, For such a beautifully kind reply and always bringing me smiles! .. Your poetry speaks in the breeze so beautifully, to all hearts so deep, to all hearts so movingly! .. God bless dear! .. :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 September 2018

Wow you have a sweet heart to think so kindly and nicely of a mouse and not kill it like many do. And your mouse too was nice it wanted to go out than stay and steal the goodies. I think I will write a mouse or rat poem someday inspired by u. Your poem was lovely and poetic. Thumbs up. Soo nice to read from your inking again, Pleez do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem titled, a tribute to every new poem, interaction is my way to greet.

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Rebecca Navarre 11 September 2018

Thank you! .. S. zaynab, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry is filled with strength and beauty that, to hearts does speak! .. Ever so many blessings! .. And I look forward to reading your poem! ..

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