Wednesday, December 12, 2018

Country Morning Comments

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She left home for the city but never lost her yearning.
For the sweet smell of a country morning.
Her life was now filled with city smog.
And loud city noises gave her brain fog.
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Lamar Cole
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

Yeah the country has its rustic peaceful charms and is more in tune with nature and more nature friendly than the flashy city. This is an awesome poem in eloquent rhyming that expresses that cleverly in brevity. Kudos. Soo nice to read from your inking again pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

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Rini shibu 12 December 2018

You cannot enjoy the beauty of nature in city..good one

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