Tuesday, February 15, 2005

Country Girl Gone Wrong Comments

Rating: 3.3

To Humbug Molly, her ilk, and all
Misfortune attend and disaster befall!
May life be to her a succession of hurts;
May fleas by the bushel inhabit her skirts;
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Sidi Mahtrow
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Catastrophe King 10 August 2006

First of all - I loved the physical shape of the poetry; those hills going up and down.... I think that was intentional! And, then the vengenance.... OMG! You do have some lethal style.... Infact your talent is appreciable - I am lovin it.... it is quiet enjoyable to read...a 10 could be less for this.... Good work, indeed!

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Dee Daffodil 12 May 2006

Yikes...remind me never to cross you Sidi...this one was just dripping with pure vengeance. well done! Hugs, Dee

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Jerry Bolton 15 February 2005

Haha! Damn! Since I have just arrived at this place of words and punctuation, I don't know exactly what is going on, but I do know a love poem when I see one and this isn't one. Loved it, man.

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Poetry Hound 15 February 2005

I actually admire Molly Ivins, so no offense taken by your screed. It actually comes off as pretty humorous. She'd probably get a chuckle out of it too.

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