Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, November 29, 2011

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As village boy I wondered at the changes
It was first entry in city in the young age
I was flying in the air with lots of enthusiasm
The journey had opened with colors seen from the prism
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Allemagne Roßmann 30 November 2011

A poem of human displacement and adaptation....well written and very intrinsic conceptions..

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Dead Leaf 30 November 2011

excellent write, this is what we call true feelings. nice

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C. P. Sharma 30 November 2011

A poem written in deep patriotic fervor.

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Jinal Oswal 30 November 2011

Great! ! thanks to you :) You in a way gave us life.. with standing on the borders keeping the foes out of sight... 'Life is to be on move with rush and movement' wonderfully penned life.. Keep Writing Sir :)

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Jacqui Broad 30 November 2011

A perfect description of city life. It's a dog eats dog world, give me the countryside any day. There you can live at your own pace. Great poem!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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