Monday, July 2, 2007

Countless Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

See these tears
watch them fall,
they're all because
of this stupid wall,
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beautiful imperfection
COMMENTS
Ken E Hall 04 October 2009

Such a nice little tale in this poem and your put yourself on a learning journey and in the end I'm sure a magic carpet will be waiting for you with no tears++++10 regards

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Angela Combs 02 July 2007

beautiful poem. I am sure many can understand that deep seated pain...

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