Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Countless Pennies For Untold Thoughts Of.... Comments

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Dancing names and swirling fingers
Many orange glow faces
Pondering the rhythm of reality
Chasing dreams with desire
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Manny Francis III 29 October 2008

I have to second Joe's sentiments. Also, i thought you got out of the gat nicely with the first few lines. The first line itself is gold. Congrats on a good write.

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Joseph Poewhit 29 October 2008

I like that little whisper of HOPE - in the last line

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