Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Counting Stars Through Your Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.6

Dark was born to show light
As secret of stars revealed at night
No matter how dark was your heart
I still found the beauty of your side
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 November 2017

No matter how dark they colored your words As dark was born to show the light Truth will shine over the shade As much as stars revealed at night! ............nice theme. Truth can't be hidden in spite of several veils it must come out and will shine over the shade. Mistakes are dark like and these can be good for making better understanding. This is a beautiful poem with lofty insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 September 2017

Ever So Strong And Beautiful! ! ! ! ! A Very Powerfully Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! Shines With True Gold! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Again And Again, Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 August 2016

Revealed at night! Thanks for sharing.

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Marvin Brato 24 January 2014

Like an ember, love sparks even with the darkest soul!

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Ramesh Rai 28 November 2013

Light can not be imagined without dark

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Yasmin Khan 25 November 2013

The very title of the verse attracts the attention. it has some very beautiful lines: But how our eyes can map the whole universe When imperfection is part of us''. Human soul is capable of this, and this's been mu favorite quote: 'secret of stars is revealed at night.

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Dee Corpolongo 24 November 2013

Love this poem, Soul....you speak of the stars, and the spark in one's eyes, you realize the truth, and when someone lies. Lessons we all must learn, and pain we have all experienced, my dear friend, .. many {{{hugs}}} I send.

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Wahab Abdul 21 November 2013

I think this is your best poem i have read for the fact that it followed well with apt words and suitable diction the theme is no less attractive..and easy to read and understand.. moreover the poem contains a bit philosophy which i like most...........thanks for sharing..10

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Valerie Dohren 21 November 2013

Deep and meaningful - without darkness there can be no light, and imperfection can lead us to become better. Lovely poem Soul.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2013

A shining starry poem of trust n friendship. Great how u say our eyes cant map d whole universe. What a verse! Fond wishes soul.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 November 2013

Beautiful poem Soul. Yes, we are imperfect, we often make mistakes.Truth often taste bitter. Trust and honesty must be there in relationship, as it can overcome many mistakes. Meaningful write. Loved it.

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Jinal Oswal 19 November 2013

Hi Soul.. hope you doing great. It is a remarkable poem. Beautiful way to say what you feel despite of the negative things happening. But is it really this simple to still see the stars when it is dark? I really wonder being poets we express but does it really reach out to the person?

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Neela Nath Das 19 November 2013

You are absolutely right Soul.It's a very lovely piece.

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Kavya . 19 November 2013

a very noble thought indeed _Soul.

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Noreen Carden 18 November 2013

Hi soul this is a beautiful poem well done

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Paul Brookes 17 November 2013

Through the glass darkly shins the stars, reflections to the soul, of winters heart, to find good and bad, light and dark and here we have truth. I like it BB : O)

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Negar Gorji 17 November 2013

dear soul i dooooooooooo liked it. i dont know why u think its not strong? ? ? ? it was my heart sayings, as well.

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Nader Baheri 16 November 2013

stars can guide us beautifully and silently.just we must trust on them.and we have to remember when it s completely dark we can see stars. very beautiful poem with fantastic ending.i enjoyed ending most.~nb

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Malini Kadir 14 November 2013

stars...... that gleam in the dark... like your honesty too!

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Pradip Dasgupta 13 November 2013

really a good poem.dark was born to show light, the line is impressive

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