Friday, September 22, 2006

Counting Numbered Days Comments

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Four hundred thousand drops of rain
have fallen since I last blinked.
Seven clouds stretching from one town
to the other have eaten each other.
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Nalini Hebbar 22 September 2006

vincent...this is a beautiful poem...sometimes counting makes one feel better...love...nalini

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 September 2006

perhaps you should start counting your blessings too. painful images. where is my box of tissues. ten to wipe my tears.

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Marilyn Shepperson 22 September 2006

Wonderful poem, beautifully written; one I should think everyone could relate to.Marilyn

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David Darbyshire 22 September 2006

You bored Vince? have a nice weekend.......................Dave

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Esther Leclerc 22 September 2006

That ache - how well you describe it, Vincent, in all its torturous endlessness.

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