Counting Colors Comments
I noticed the broken flower pot on the front porch this morning,
One of the few gifts from Charley, more to my liking than sentimental,
Cat, dogs or kids, who broke it, I'll never know,
The mixed emotions I felt were hardly incidental,
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What a remarkable writer you are. With such softness your words caress the reader. The use of such visuals, texture blends this piece into perfection.10/10 best wishes Jon
The way you went about the whole structure of this poem is simply superb. As if someone communicating in poetical phrases.
Such a sweet poem. Purely sweet and sweetly pure. I'm glad I could read it. Regards Lauren
A lovely balanced poem...I love the Collie metaphor :) The joys of observation are underrated! Best wishes :) jack
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7/27/2025 10:00:53 AM # 1.0.0
It was a nice read. It sounds like you have got alot. counting 8 colours, I am colourblind. With this poem you have your composure and you also get ten out of ten from me.