Counterfeit Blues Comments
The Versace faded quickly
On the clothes line
It had been hung up upside down
And the wind quickly exposed
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Brilliant poem Wojja, well that's what I 'Fink' I enjoyed the read. Come and read one of mine...well, if you like? Ruth
a lesson; yes...and a message too, John...well written piece...intelligent clever
A truly admirable poem. Some superb images; 'Turned to rust/Quicker than ice cream to slush' to name just one. From the title through to the closing lines, this poem is perfect - its only fault being, I should have written it! ! S :)
Excellent comparisons in this creative write. I really enjoyed reading & I fink you definately earn a 10/10 :) A couple of typos if you don't mind some constructive criticism cos I know you did not mean to compare to dried out pudding or retune your home :)
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7/24/2025 2:57:45 AM # 1.0.0
A Lot of imagination went into this one, A lot of thought could take you one way or another to scramble it. Which I know was exactly what you planned. Well Done.... from Chris