Sunday, May 31, 2009

Counterfeit Blues Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Versace faded quickly
On the clothes line
It had been hung up upside down
And the wind quickly exposed
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Wojja Fink
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Christine Kerr 12 June 2009

A Lot of imagination went into this one, A lot of thought could take you one way or another to scramble it. Which I know was exactly what you planned. Well Done.... from Chris

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Keith Parsons 07 June 2009

Beautiful poem...great job

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Obinna Eruchie 03 June 2009

imaginative and well penned.

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Ruth Walters 03 June 2009

Brilliant poem Wojja, well that's what I 'Fink' I enjoyed the read. Come and read one of mine...well, if you like? Ruth

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

a lesson; yes...and a message too, John...well written piece...intelligent clever

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Susan Jarvis 31 May 2009

A truly admirable poem. Some superb images; 'Turned to rust/Quicker than ice cream to slush' to name just one. From the title through to the closing lines, this poem is perfect - its only fault being, I should have written it! ! S :)

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Tia Maria 31 May 2009

Excellent comparisons in this creative write. I really enjoyed reading & I fink you definately earn a 10/10 :) A couple of typos if you don't mind some constructive criticism cos I know you did not mean to compare to dried out pudding or retune your home :)

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