"What did you do as father to us"?
We have almost come off age and trust
You are saying "No" to all our demands
This has been your permanent stand
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Mc Jay hmmmh! ...to the point! ..nyc one.3 hours ago via mobile · Like
Efe Light Sakpere True of all u wrote, lol.4 hours ago via mobile · Like
Maria Fátima Silva Very beautiful and true, sometimes there is generation gap... and thank goodness...3 hours ago · Like
“What did you do as father to us”? We have almost come off age and trust You are saying “No” to all our demands This has been your permanent stand
Hasmukh ji, with due respect to you and the theme you have taken up in this poem, I should say your thoughts don't come throgh very well here. May be for the issues you want to touch upon, poem may not be the ideal mode. Perhaps, an 'opinion' in prose form may have been more appropriate. However, I do appreciate your efforts to versify everything. Regards. GSP Rao, Hyderabad May 8,2012 --------------------