Friday, January 3, 2003

Count-Time Comments

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Everybody to sleep the guard symbolizes
on his late night tour of the tombs.
When he leaves, after counting still bodies
wrapped in white sheets, when he goes,
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Jimmy Santiago Baca
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Richard 10 January 2018

Nice poem, I liked the words. Elvis would have liked this

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 November 2015

'' the bodies slowly move, in solitary ritual, counting lost days, mounting memories, '' though not really original, it is a nice poetic image..

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Javier Zamorano 15 January 2010

Count time- a memory both distant yet always with me. Elephants traveling to bury themselves is a sad but also beautiful depiction of life. Thank you for the added colors to life.

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Jimmy Santiago Baca

Jimmy Santiago Baca

Santa Fe, New Mexico
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