Monday, August 10, 2020

Count My Blessings Comments

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Damn! I finish work hours early,
Finally get some time of my own.
Suddenly the front door knocks,
As it opens slowly with a groan.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 11 August 2020

Sorry to hear about the dreaded work blues Shaun, but at least you have perfectly encapsulated THAT feeling, ' that sometimes cuts like a knife' in this well written poem. It's certainly a troubled and tired but inspired ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2020

You are blessed, Shaun. You have a work. There are many people who are right now unemployed. Yes, we must count our blessings. And we have to thank, God very single day for being alive and enjoy the wonders of existence. A very well expressed write that we could relate to. Enjoyed reading it.

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