Friday, November 24, 2017

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She remembers how she wept,
in her juvenile days, while her nipples still wet
the maiden demise, her kid brought
a face she wouldn't remember now
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage
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Susan Williams 05 December 2017

A sensitive write on the heart-ache of outliving your loved ones while perhaps still feeling young inside and remembering her youth and as age tangles the pathways to memory she perhaps only feels that something is not quite right.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2017

A poem on death, grief and lost love wirh heartfelt depiction. It may be quoted..... Her memory hasn't faded fully, yet on her grandson's recent departure too. Beautifully inscribed and amazingly shared.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 November 2017

How she wept! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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