Couldn't Become Christ Comments
Couldn't become Christ
She, she was...; wasn't written on paper
about her my pen said: I'm powerless you see;
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Use of wonderful imagery in crafting the poem. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing. 'I lowered my wings around my chest overwhelmed by evil that stifled my zest this time needs no Christ, a saint I can't be.'..says how enamored you are with her beauty.10++++
Naila thank you... I do not know why the can not reply to your comets! sorry
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7/28/2025 5:58:31 AM # 1.0.0
a wonderful imagery! diction is nice. what was in her eyes, water or wine? - a beautiful line! a beautiful poem, dear sir!
thank you Jagdish!