Friday, October 17, 2008

Couldn'T Be Mine* Comments

Rating: 2.8

My words desert me
So anything can hurt me without you
Just the little things get to me
You’re here to help me up the mountain
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Mrs. Cynosure
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Okan Emanet 28 April 2009

Really effective style. You have such a mastering talent that in every line you leave an outstanding trace on me. Really good job Well done

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Sierra Love 23 December 2008

Beautiful...really beautiful.

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Lesten White-Pigeon 20 December 2008

great poem....i understand fully..cant wait to read more of what you have!

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Sebastine Humaemo 13 December 2008

a strong write crystal......show's how much a girl cries in her heart when she comes to know, her loved one goin to depart for ever.....thanks for sharing...sebastine...

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Aijaz Asif 10 December 2008

a very beautiful and strong write becca, specia; ; y these 2 lines i loved most...thanks 10+++++ because I will die standing on my feet rather then live on my knees....bravo, bravo rgds asif

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Saint Cynosure 10 November 2008

I have yet another poem of yours that I love so much...

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Yrh Hadesfk 29 October 2008

I really enjoyed this poem great job

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