When you smile with a cheerful face
Touching my soul staying far far away,
I dream of you with a delightful mind
And live for you every night and day.
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I have read over 10 of your poems now so far I like this one best and rated it a 10.
wow great write... nice expression i invite you to read and comment on my poems.
Wow! Realy fantastic.. It reveals ur feelings n love 4 d 1 u wrote..: -)
Love.......bound in everyone's life......... :) Nice..........I like the way u expressed.
Carnal love throbs violently between the symbols.A fine poem.
its really beautiful and very romantic.. well crafted and nice imagery....
Well-rhymed beautiful poem. Merry Christmas and Happy New year to you and your family.
Simple and intensely romantic. you have rhymed with a deft hand. Very good poems.
Expressing the thoughts of a person in love can only be done by a poet who has experienced it. And it clearly shows in your words.
Dear Poet, I am very much honored to find you and your verses. From the first glance itself, the class of the romantic flame within you is self announcing! Ages might trample human experiences, winnings and even long-cherished dreams and expectations, but the kind of mellifluous muse might keep permeating over generations. Your craft has its peculiar hue and scent. Maintain them for ever more. I would love to read some more, let me. will duly mail you. take care. rgds. tajudeen shah
A romantic poem with over flowing love so gently told touches the chords of the heart.A true poem with rhyme and rhythm is splendid!
A beautiful 'love' poem. Romance and Respect rolled up together.
Outpouring of passionate romance! The question at the end is redundant! You yourself have answered it! A well structured poem!
Very romantic is the tune! Well rhymed, nicely constructed poem.
........a lovely romantic lay, brings out all emotions beautifully.........