Could You Love Me? Comments
I asked the moon
if you could ever love me.
She did not respond
but just turned kind of green
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Beautiful lovely lines of poetry. We keep seeking until we find that which we need.
I may have lost a comment or two I just 'sent'? ? ? line 2: I think 'she', not 'you'. You end of st.1 was humorous. : )
This is a nice poem. Life sometimes doesn't give you what you long for... and it is sad in love.
Do you mean that is sad to be in love? I have to disagree. It is WONDERFUL to be in love. Thanks for commenting.
now that is a love poem that would put a smile in the heart of any worthy gal! ! ! ! I so enjoy your poetry, my friend, they have humor, heart, and bedrock wisdom
Susan, thank you so much. I had not seen your comment sooner, but glad I saw it now.
Welcome back, Ron! Thanks for bringing back this delightful poem! We love you!
Just reading this delightful poem again. I love it!
What a delight this poem is! It sings by, and takes us along with, It's sweet images and loving sighs.
I asked the stars if our love was in the cards and their only reply was a twinkle in their eyes.....beautiful poetic expression!
Magnificent poem! Poetry at its best! Wonderfully crafted. To my Poem List.
you had me laughing out loud and falling out of my chair... I needed this poem today! ! !
Thanks, Susan. Stay in your chair so you can keep wring your great poems.
A beautiful emotional poem. Full of love flowing through verse. Well penned.
An amazing write! I imagine you are standing before your love and do not know know how to say 'I love you'.You look at the moon, to the stars, to the sky and just fumbling for words --Yes, it is not easy to say those few words ---Five stars for the poem.
Thank you, Bharati. An amazing comment from an amazing person.
This is an amazing poem, a hilarious poem deserves 5 Stars full on Top! I have much enjoyed, Ron! Very entertaining poem!
Thank you, everyone, for the comments. The last time I tried to reply individually to the comments, the replies never showed up.
Well done, Cowboy! I loved the clever way you asked moon, stars, wind, sun, and then the fujn ending.
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7/29/2025 4:43:31 AM # 1.0.0
oh my word! you just put a smile on my grumpy face
Susan, thank you for revisiting this poem and commenting again.