Thursday, January 30, 2014

Could You Care... Comments

Rating: 4.8

could you care
just a little more (out loud)
shout from the silence of your room
sing, even if off key
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Susan Lacovara
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Thomas Vaughan Jones 14 February 2014

Very good Susan. I can sense you stamping your foot in frustration. Men can remain stuffily impervious when it suits them. Gotta go now. The game is on TV. :)

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Anthony Burkett 13 February 2014

This is another one that I read and reread time and time again... it brings to mind my most heartfelt desire... a need... the essence of being wanted... and I delight in these lines... even though they were not written for me... the feeling is still the same. If anyone asks... I will blame it on being invaded by the spirit of St. Valentine... or maybe not... :)

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James Mclain 31 January 2014

It sounds as if the things we do the things that all can hear are but a reminder that we need another person...iip

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Anthony Burkett 30 January 2014

How truly fortunate he must be... to the letter... your words spell a love that a man could cherish.

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Susan Lacovara

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