Thursday, June 25, 2009

Could You Be The One? Comments

Rating: 4.3

Out of every guy
Could you be the one?
Who was always by myside to protect me and help me up everytime I fall down
No matter what happen to me
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Christina Phan
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 June 2010

let him be the one if it is for the best beyond human reasoning... nice poem

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Preetam Shetty 04 June 2010

A 10 + should say it all......good job you have spoken your heart out

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 August 2009

Out of every guy Could you be the one Who was always by myside To protect me and Help me up Everytime I fall down...... and be the real one in time of need....so provocative and meaning ful poem....10 read mine real friend...poor friend...

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Nikunj Sharma 26 June 2009

U took me back only 15 years, this is a nice piece written with heart... keep it up young gal

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Lady Grace 25 June 2009

this is expressed wth love..too much love..grace

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Christina Phan

Christina Phan

San Jose, Califorina
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