What will it take for you to love me again?
I offer you my heart and soul completely.
Is this not enough for you?
Do you see how much this is hurting me?
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the title catches attention.and the exchange of empty words is really beautiful
Charmaine, you've written this one with so much love. I really liked it. Plus, ths title is very apt and very attention catching too! Preets
Charmaine, you've brilliantly captured every element of regret. Nothing empty about these words... a great poem! Brian