Could My Calm Coax You Comments

an engaging write, well composed.

WOW! I don't know what to admire more - the poetic language in this poem which just soars in the freedom of figurative speech and completely liberates us from the ordinary uses of languages. we are in Eden and Adam has just invented the names of things and Eve is delighted with the very first compliments man gives to woman! That's how fresh your language is. Or do I praise your wise words about love, living together with such TLC binding the two of you. Oh, Excelsior! Both aspects of this poem excel and take us to a special place we want to last.

Cloud my calm coax you to you have calmed me, marvellous writing. Beautifully presented in this forum. Nice job.