Friday, March 16, 2012

Could It Be The Wind? (For Dave) Comments

Rating: 3.5

is it then the wind,
that rattles the pane?
causing the candle to flicker,
the curtains to walk?
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Eric Cockrell
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 16 March 2012

that taste of blackness from an empty cup? Eric, Quite interesting lines! Have you seen my poem 'The wind'?

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Dave Walker 16 March 2012

Love it. A great poem, and put together so well A fantastic write. Thanks for the poem, It's an honour.

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