Saturday, February 25, 2017

Could It Be? ... Comments

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Could It Be?

The repeating of it mundane
even striking your head off concrete
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Annette Aitken
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Christopher Tye 01 March 2017

A really good poem, trust can be quite a fickle mistress as people as a generalization have a habit of letting you down at some point.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 February 2017

Wow poetic questioning muse. I like the way it ponders life n trust questions. Thumbs up, . Nice to read from your pen again, I hope u will too my latest titled 'my wee special guest'

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Susan Williams 26 February 2017

Good questions, Annette. I wish I had asked them of myself when I was young before decisions were made or, worse, decisions were not made. There are people who claim they wouldn't change a thing about their life which I guess means they lived perfect lives. I don't believe that could be. The more we ask questions about our choices the more wise we will be....Well, supposedly. We need to let people into our hearts but the moment we do our happiness can be in their hands and not ours. Quite a risk. Well done write. You've made this reader have some thoughts, some uncomfortable, some almost verging on the wise. That means your poem is a very worthwhile and productive write. 10, of course.

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Tom Billsborough 26 February 2017

A very thoughtful and intelligent poem, Annette. Definitely in my favourites' list

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2017

Release this captured mind! Thanks for sharing.

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