Wednesday, December 16, 2015

Could I Not? Comments

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If I were on the shore looking out toward the sea,
And from a distance, you beckoned to me,
Could I not tread water to reach you in haste,
To be held in your arms, and your kisses to taste?
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Anil Kumar Panda 28 December 2015

Clever use of metaphor to show your pure love. Beautiful.

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Jak Black 17 December 2015

This poem is expertly written, teasing and tantalising. Who's the lucky man, Lora?

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Missouri - United States
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