Friday, July 13, 2012

Could I Have Saved You? Comments

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If you looked at Juan you could never tell,
That he suffered so much...
He seemed to be doing well.
I knew he was not,
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Jessie Lima
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John Scully 13 July 2012

It sounds very personal, if so I'm sorry. But it is a poem very well written and with great lines of expression. I really liked it and will look out for more of your work.

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