Friday, March 2, 2012

Could Bear To Look! Comments

Rating: 3.5

broke down,
system.
faces peeled,
razor knives.
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Eric Cockrell
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Kevin Patrick 02 March 2012

a really cool write. the last two lines are very chilling and leave an impact to remember, but that's what your aiming for. Nice work!

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Dave Walker 02 March 2012

A powerful poem, a great write.

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