Thursday, February 20, 2020

Could Be With You! (Happy Birthday To My Granddaughter Heya Hashmi) Comments

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I am not with you,
you are not with me,
I can't look at you,
and you cannot see,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Unwritten Soul 04 March 2020

What a lovely tribute, the first and the last lines starting and ending the poem very softly...thats when love speaks, it speaks like that! .

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 February 2020

Feel me there my right hand is on your head, and lips are on your forehead...... beautiful blessing is described here, loving poem penned on the birthday of granddaughter though she is not near yet nearest more than heart which is expressed in this beautiful poem lovingly

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Bharati Nayak 24 February 2020

So sweetly and lovingly penned for your grand daughter.It really touches my heart.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 February 2020

What a wonderful and touching poem. So lovingly penned for a granddaughter. Yes, love can conquer boundaries. No matter where we at, the love of our beloved will always find us. So beautifully crafted and conveyed. Onto my Poem List.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 February 2020

beautiful sirrr just beautifullllllllllllllllllllllll

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 February 2020

Loved reading this beautiful poem sir! Thanks for sharing.......10+++++

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