Thursday, September 13, 2018

Cough First; Coffin Second....[ Safety Hazards; Hospital Care; S H O R T; Dust! ; Inspired By " Let The Dust Settle " By Geraldine Kelly; Serious! ] Comments

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It could be like mine, and mine's a CURSE.

I guess I should have worn my respirator mask! !
In the asbestos mine I almost (but not quite)did ask:
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Bri Edwards
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2018

first comes cough. Cough is is byproduct of suffering and this gradually degrades health. Degradation of health leads to death slowly. So, at last coffin comes. Repairing respiratory tract which we mean as medical treatment is necessary to prevent life for some more years to go towards coffin. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...Sorry for the error in previous comment! ...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2018

A poignant write with a meaningful message. A simple poem but you nailed it. Thank you for this wonderful offering, Bri.10

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Bharati Nayak 18 September 2018

The poem is like a warning.Miners work in hazardous situations.Miners must wear mask while working or it may lead to serious health issues.Thanks Bri for making us aware of ajbestos dust that may cause cancer.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2018

Yes, first comes cough. Cough is is byproduct of suffering and this gradually degrees health. Degradation of health leads to death slowly. So, at last coffin comes. Repairing respiratory tract which we mean as medical treatment is necessary to prevent life for some more years to go towards coffin. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Paul Brookes 14 September 2018

This is an amazing write It is so sad and yet hard hitting in simplicity Great pen

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Kostas Lagos 13 September 2018

Quite an optimistic poem you wrote. I will write one about funeral arrangements...

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2018

Malignant mesothelioma (me-zoe-thee-lee-O-muh) is a type of cancer that occurs in the thin layer of tissue that covers the majority of your internal organs (mesothelium) . When asbestos is broken up, such as during the mining process or when removing asbestos insulation, dust may be created. If the dust is inhaled or swallowed, the asbestos fibers will settle in the lungs or in the stomach, where they can cause irritation that may lead to mesothelioma. : (

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