Cotton Pledgets… 21-1-12 Comments

Happy birthday Sir. One year on from this write. A beautiful poem with great imagination! Much enjoyed! X

Nice poem saadat! :) keep it up

HaapPPPPppppppyyyyyyyyyy Birthdayyyyyy SssssSSSSaaaaaaAAAAAttttttttttttttt may UUUUUUUUUUUU hAVE MannnnnnnnnnnNNNNNNNNNNNYYYYYYYYYYYYYY mORE

you have beautiful number here 21-1-12 (it's like a palindromic date or day and years in mirror reflection) but the truest is Happy Birthday (today is his birthday) Yay! ! ! ! ! Happy Birthday Sat, your elegant write will always white as cotton, may your new days will embrace your smile always...keep your writing alive, it always excellent and make life so nice in your purple smile_Unwritten Soul

Many many happy returns of the day...this poem reminds me of Joyce ' use of Epiphany, a religious term that refers to Magi who saw a baby in a manger but who saw more than a baby...it looks your own personal epiphany which serves like a casement through which you are trying to look into, n record, your past life...ebb n flow of many a tide/cantor, gallop of youthful ride....and, , painful sear of broken ties...don't know whether i have reached the thematic content or not, but it is beautifully composed in typical saadat tahir standard of diction...simply lovely poem...very good