Cotton Field Comments

emotional... words are expressed the way they should be... nice write here as always... good job!

my grand dad died when i was young, an open coffin funaral, and never felt closer to death, standing next to a cold body, of someone i knew. good poem. if it not to much trouble, please read some of my poems. comments would be welcome.

I was very young when my dad died and I didnt believe my mom that he was dieing... I still dont... maybe that is childish but I think my mom took me away from my dad and he didnt die. so I know of the feeling I guess. Purkey Girl

it is really hard to say goodbye to a loved one i know the feeling my grand father died about 2 years ago but its a really good poem

Saying Good-Bye to a loved one that is sick is very hard. Not many people can do because they can't grasp the fact that that person is dying. Beautiful Poem Thanks for sharing. -Brie

We all sometimes have a problem saying goodbye to loved ones. Very beautifully written.