Cotton Candy Trees Comments

A beautiful write Val. It is very sad when good things must come to end.

Beautiful poem Valerie, yet so sad.

Yes my fiend, I will follow, we will at last hold hands eternally.

So sad Valerie but beautifully written

It might be the ending of some things, but a beautiful beginning of new things to come sad but nice write

Love this very sad but oh so true poem concerning life as it once was, and love Thomas's comment/poem to go along with it! Such great poets here! ! ! Although it is sad, it is still amazing, Val, and I can relate all to well. {{{hugs}}}

The pessimistic veil being transparent and the melancholic note being quite natural in drawing such pictures, dear Valerie, you always stick to your poetic urge of experimenting with the innovative in painting life... Go ahead.

Again the tone of melacholy! ! You are leaving / But I will follow you! Instead of being crest fallen, follow him and call him back! Very poignant! !

Such a sad poem. I Know the feelings all too well when I lost my partner. All partings are bereavements even if its splitting up or divorcing You express loss so well 10/10 thanks for sharing BB : O)

This is how I felt losing my wife. A bitter sweet poem delightfully crafted.

You r leavin but I 'll follow... superb work of yours touched the heart very lovely

It's not the end of Everything, and the decision of following in the end justifies the title...! ! !

A great poem, a sad fact of life is that everything we love has to come to an end.

end of all things- all things that used to be. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.