Friday, November 4, 2005

Cotton Candy Comments

Rating: 3.7

You feel like a cotton glove?
A roaming of which my hands love.
Soft and smooth your skin
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Coach Roth 06 April 2008

I really like this...good imagery and metaphor...and just a nice fine rhythm...well done...Coach

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