Cotton Candy Comments

if i copy this will it be considered as plagiarism

we call it fairy floss in Australia. Fairies swish it between their teeth. Well and good for them. As they don't eat they don't need their teeth.

This is a great start on a poem that could be full of sexual innuendo! Take it further! ! ! Make my heart beat

Very well done my friend! Keep it up...

Its really a tempting cotton candy. Really loved relishing it. I hope the candy is ready to be served to readers....Interesting poem. Loved reading it.

childhood memories, something that was forgotten but suddenly makes me miss the days that a simple idea but a broad influence on the reader beautiful poem

A nice reollection of childhood days, nice poem.

very beautiful vision~! I want to have the cotton candy clouds too~ can I reach for them? Thanks for sharing, a sweet poem ^^

Nice. Glad to read it.

Nostalgic, once forgotten now I remember, ......... nice

nice one..keep it up

Creative image kind of poem,

Really nice poem.. You are into brilliant poemhunter...

nice...just like went back to our childhood..

very nice! refreshing to come across a GOOD poem in here! brings back nice memories thank you

Took me to that fair of yours. Could almost taste it. Good write.

I like this a lot. Very evocative of time, place, and sensory sensation.