Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Cost Of Freedom Comments

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The night was cold,
But with bodies hot and roaring to go,
The skies black, filled with smoke and, lit with fire works,
But not the ones you want to see.
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Mrs. Cynosure
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C J 08 November 2009

Good Job, but your sensitivity betray your weakness in these poem, You still have long road to strength your feelings and avoid lie your self, It's a real world out there girl outside from you and real Freedom come always with a price, remember that, good poem but you can try better.

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