Monday, December 31, 2012

Cosmos Comments

Rating: 5.0

With eyes of white,
And with the force of a flood,
The angel strikes against,
The one whose soul is soaked in blood.
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William Williams
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Mel. D. 04 January 2013

I like the narrative style and how you created this giant battle scene that seems like it would take forever, the in the last stanza say its only been a day. It makes one wonder about what all can go on in a day without us ever suspecting anything.

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Caltha Garafi 31 December 2012

This is amazing, It flows very well!

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