Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Cosmogony Comments

Rating: 5.0

You say, you like sun to shine on your face.
I say, grey and rain, suits my mood just fine.
I don't really care, if there's a sun to shine,
It's by you, whom I am fascinated and amaze'.
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Jacqui Broad
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Harindhar Reddy 03 November 2011

Hello jacqui, Countries has limitation just like we have temptations. Yet imagination is also nation but without any geographical or time limit! The way wrote was delighting but it seems you love does run smooth! ha! This time many smiles for you :) 'I don't really care, if there's a sun to shine, It's by you, whom I am fascinated and amaze'.' Your poetic words are attracting, your romantic language fascinating. A-z Your poems are scintillation in the life of oscillating you are king! ha! ha! ha!

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2011

Sweet..and i love the title, it was a good choice as it describe your poem very well...sun and rain..wow i like it very much _Unwritten Soul

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