Cosmic (Wo) Man Comments

i thinks this mastermind poem penned on the strengthen the womanhood of this cosmos thoughtfully penned - t's time to learn lessons................r gathering light Perhaps the interwovenness of matter's laws Is a tale told by Her spiritual struggle .............................. To support the material world at any moment....///

Wowww your cosmic babe shines in intellectual brilliance. Sublime and artsy muse indeed. I have an unpost Poem where I refer to the branches in the body so I liked your impressive inclusion of that. What u mean by birds in the body, u mean soaring imagination? Kudos and long may u write.

Perhaps the interwovenness of matter's laws Is a tale told by spirit's struggle Perhaps it has inner vistas of becoming Perhaps an infinity of events must happen To support the material world at any moment - - - - - - - - - - - -

(cont.) i think i saw a cosmic babe shaking her booty on the corner of Main Street and Elm Ave. at midnight last night. NICE! ! ! (i mean the 'babe') thanks for sharing. i had the same question (as Madathil did) about the Chinese below your English. a Poet's note explaining that it is your (shorter) Chinese translation of your (orignal) English would be nice for readers to see. bri ;)

(cont.) Oh, i think you are being 'clever' using (wo) man to indicate a woman or the duo nature of the human species.? ? but it just confuse me! ! so far the poem is 'over my head', and thus not entertaining, but i do like these two lines: Pitiful nest-befouling sapiens Only glimpses his larger body in flickers...of course by flickers you MUST refer to more than one Colaptes auratus! (cont.)

Neotenous: meaning that characteristics of infancy are prolonged into adolescence and even into adulthood is sometimes used when speaking of ME, at age 70, ....and i'm PROUD of it! ! ! Especially regarding the characteristic of being CUTE! ! is wo meaning cosmic OR man in Chinese, ......or neither? (cont.)

I like your footnote (2) which stresses the right view that all that we have in this world are just a 'given'. It is all precisely pre-ordained however vehemently we try to uphold the idea of freewill. Well done, Sir. Congrats! BTW, what does the writing in Chinese below the poem say?

! Have you been reading India's Rig Veda? Your poem reads like the Veda's Purusha Suktam (Hymn Dedicated To The Cosmic Being) . You can google/check Wikipedia for more details. Needless to say your poem is profound, demands repeated deep delving and analysis as does the Suktam. (10)