Friday, October 11, 2013

Cosmic Will Comments

Rating: 5.0

When continents collide
Will humankind abide
By the cosmic will
Or will we stand still
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Lento Maez
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Khairul Ahsan 21 October 2013

You have brought in a good subject. 'How little we know Of the ebb and flow Of the cosmos way As we’re led astray By society’s false sway' I think it's time to wake up and awaken people up so that no more we can be 'led astray by society's false sway.' A good poem.10/10.

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Sandra Feldman 20 October 2013

The blindness, selfishness and disregard of those that govern will be always the downfall of humanity. Very beautifully and correctly said here, And we're led astray by Society's false sway History doesn't seem to teach us any lessons. A whole treatise of our strange human history and behavior spelled out in a very effective and lovely poem. So much said and so very well said,

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Patricia Grantham 12 October 2013

A lovely poem. The Creators will is final. We can't add to nor take away from it. His will, will be done. Very inspiring.

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