Tuesday, May 16, 2017

Cosmic Talk Comments

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I play for you delightful melodies of harp,
On the edge of a cliff,
As the stars are leaking from their beds
From the sky, onto the long palm leafs
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Ayni Poet
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Bill Cantrell 18 August 2017

A tapestry in motion are the heavens and at the edge of night, epic sunsets do indeed drink! Your poetry is a very refreshing surprise! , very well written.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 May 2017

An innovative approach. Thanks

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