Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Cosmic Skyscape Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my meanders high above
beyond the cries of mourning dove
on voyages a spaceship flies
where poets' reveries arise,
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Harley White
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Savita Tyagi 31 July 2018

Such a captivating and mesmerizing poem. First it pulled me with mysteries of space than with mythology and poetic references and finally with human emotions and aspirations, dwelling deep in to our hopes and desires. All through the poem I enjoyed the great rhyming pattern. Thank you for sharing. It would require more than one reading to enjoy in depth.

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Harley White 31 July 2018

What a marvelous reaction to my poem! I see that you have recognized all the various aspects I included in it. The fact that this long poem held your interest so well is truly gratifying. Thank you!

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Bill Cantrell 01 August 2018

I have noticed in her poetry the human element also, I think that is what breathes spirit into her words, she is my favorite poet

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2018

It is easy to see through your words, just how much you love astronomy. I always enjoy your poems and the photographs and information you provide.

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Harley White 31 July 2018

I’m so glad you enjoy these poems of mine. Indeed I am captivated by astronomy, which also makes me realize how special our own planet is.

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Bill cantrell 31 July 2018

The monkey head nebula, the monkey watches pillars of babys begotten as starry knot clusters wait to adopt, the morning dove doth coo at morn in plaintive call as day is born, .....I will have to come back and read this again, over my head but maybe I can glean a few poetic breadcrumbs, love it! !

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Harley White 31 July 2018

Thanks very much for reading my long poem! I always love to see a response from you! I couldn’t put links, but all the info is available and not hard to grasp. So glad you like it!

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