Cosmic Order (Haiku) Comments

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A brilliant haiku! Excellent!

beautifully written the cosmic order//10+

This is a Haiku on a subject which is hardly talked of. Uniquely written. Only I'd say is that Haiku in itself is a contracted form of poetry, so I would much rather prefer " swelled" and " called" for even these have the same number of syllables. (Swell'd actually looks nice, though)

A truly wonderful haiku.......10++++