...Cosmic Me Comments

brilliant poem sarvesh...I loved every bit of it.....10

I like your style of writing sarvesh. 'Cosmic Me' is a poem where you show off and fly with your wild imagination. I do not know what 'aum kaar' is but I do like the way you describe it within you, in the second verse. This poem was enjoyable to read.10/10.

a power packed poem of a cosmic being! sarvesh it is a fantastic poem.i just loved going through it.

a power packed poem! sarvesh your many incarnations have been so good, you are sarvesh now. for us.keep writing.god bless you.

Stunning piece you have here...beautiful imagery, flow, and excellent choice of words. Great job!