Saturday, June 1, 2019

Cosmic Man Comments

Rating: 4.5

I've flown across the Universe
bathed in the worlds tears.
Held souls in my hand
stepping on distant stars
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Smoky Hoss
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Glen Kappy 05 July 2019

hey, smoky! good to see this one i hadn't seen before. i see the richard rohr quote. you may know he lives here in albuquerque where i also live. his quote reminds of philippians 2: 5-11... since God is love, love is the ground, the origin, of all that call us back to itself. be well, brother. -glen

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 June 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Smoky Hoss. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Denis Mair 01 June 2019

This write is boundless in scope and conception, yet driven by warm human feelings. I especially like these lines: .I NEED FOREVER LOVE/ THE KIND THE COSMOS ARE MADE OF. Searching for love tunes you in, so you know that love went into making the cosmos. My eye was caught by the title, because I too wrote a poem titled COSMIC MAN.

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