There’s a smiley face in space
that’s beaming from above
at our mindless human race
on Earth we say we love.
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My friend, I wrote you a poem, just a token of my admiration of you
Made a revisit. An apt response to the irresponsible acts of man
Nothin illusionary about this telescopic write. Unfortunately man and womankind seem headed to assured destruction, because of all the reason mentioned above, perhaps already too late. But there is always hope that a cosmic awareness could save us all.
My dear friend, I just directed some of my best friends to your poetry, I hope they will check you out, I told them you are one of a kind...you are by far my favorite poet and that’s saying a lot for I really like many, but you are my intrigue and fascination and I see your humble heart through your genius 😊
I cannot thank you enough for your constant support support and encouragement! You are indeed a true poetic friend and greatly appreciated! Thank you so much!
Great poem! I love the thought of a smiley face in space! I would invite you to read my poems (I have five of them) , but my account is new and the poems are not activated yet. This really surprises me. I thought people would be able to read my poems as soon as I posted them!
This is a very well written poem, I really appreciate it...! ! pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my poems too, & please check my site too :) :)
Very beautiful poem dear poetess...To me the poem of my day: . Thanks
wau.....it is a good poem...cosmic lens........................
You most welcome mam....and I m glad to see U a good poet here...
My friend, I hope you like my poem... poetic breach, , , , in honor of your poetry.
I am truly honored by your not at all feeble homage! Thank you so much!
I am not an astromist, a lay man, perhaps a poet, but you made me interested in reading A Smiling Lens. It shows you succeeded as a poetess to convey your message. It's an evidence that it's a good poem and a well deserved selection as member's poem of the day. Congrats.
Thank you for sharing your reaction to the poem! One of my hopes is to also awaken more interest in astronomy and make these wonders more accessible to others. I’m pleased to know that you feel I succeeded in this goal!
Man's plunder of the earth to fulfil his greed in the name progress should have to end somewhere so that the earth can be rescued from an impending castraphore. The alarming rate of global climate change is a pointer towards things to come. Loved the poem and the cosmic prespective.
Your feedback really captures the message of the poem. The universe will go on, but humankind is hastening the end of our time here on earth. I’m glad that you enjoyed it!
And now my dear friend, your poetry is shining, I am extremely happy that this poem made poem of the day, your poetry is totally in a class by itself! ! The great endeavor...an earthly state of graceful truth, congratulations,10+++++
Ah, you have seen the poem… I was surprised and pleased to see it selected for today. That image seemed to beg for a poem. And I too am happy to see these warmhearted words from you! Such approval makes my poetic labors feel worthwhile! Thank you once again!
It is a beautiful, interesting and important poem on the base of science. Congratulations for the poem of the day.
a wonderful poem of beautiful places but for how long will they stay that way before the human disgrace rapes and pillagers in the name of progress? .....................superbly written HW.
Indeed, that is the question... Thank you for your affirmative words!
How will our folk tale end up? Could that grinning gal or guy be a parodic send-up, satirizing us on high? We’re drowning in excessive stuff at a fast and frenzied pace… When will people shout, “Enough! ”? Full of nerve teasers..Philosophical questions, Glad to find someone teaching future of physics so elegantly, and speaking on behalf of mankind without standing on the UNGA...United nations General Assembly. Thanks poet for the marvelous art in these words. 10+++ for this great poem. Subhas
Such an eye-opening poem..... congrats for being selected...a perfect 10++++
Glad to read your here on Poem Hunter. I understand the poem, with a theme: Let us save the planet. Yes indeed whatever the activities done in the name of development technological advancement. All are deteriorating the life of earth. A senseless looting of natural resources making our earth frail and fragile. Hope people will understand the value of it. Especially money oriented people have to understand this. Just for business and profit they are neglecting the effect of its outcome to ordinary general human mass. Thank you again for sharing.this awakening poem if people understand its essence.
Thank you very much for reading this and sharing your reactions! Yes, human beings certainly need to wake up, and I'm pleased to know the poem has touched a chord with you...
Hats off to the Cosmic lens that has depicted the reiteration of self destruction process carries out by human in the name of progress. Congrats for inking such a thought provoking poem as also on it's Poem of the Day.
"our mindless human race"