Friday, September 22, 2006

Cosmic Dementia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Everything blends
Dissolving and combining
Before my eyes
Within my head
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Sheila Burns
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Brian Dorn 15 October 2006

Great ending, Sheila! If only all of us could be so happily demented, the world might just be a better place (or at least it would seem like it) . Excellent write! Brian

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Michael Manners 22 September 2006

Excellent! Well Written Poem! Flows beautifully! A Pleasure 2 read!

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Dawn Michelle 22 September 2006

Wow. I really liked that. You really have a passion for writing don't you? Anyways, great job.

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