Cosmic Couple (Palindrome) Comments
Shiva and Shakti
Dancing in union
Spirit and matter
Primordially paired...
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Pregnant with meaning and significance. This poem blends feeling with craftsmanship to create a cocktail that is so beautiful that words simply cannot express.
Very inspiring words from you, helps me to keep going and want to write more.
simply gorgeous poem. these are very difficult to write and you have done it with relative ease. look forward to more.
Am working on a few more. This genre is tricky for sure. Thank you for your comments.
This is a truly beautiful poem. The symmetry is exceptional and I loved reading it. Great job.
A palindromic poem written as though by a man at least four times older. You are very talented, my friend
Coming from you, that's the best any young poet can ask. Hope you are doing well. I totally enjoyed the poem Swifts today. A poem written by a master story teller.
Finally, a comment from you on one of my poems. Glad you liked it.
Finally a comment from you on one of my poems. Hope to see you soon. Am glad you enjoyed it.
Oh God...this is so awesome. The poetry form is really fantastic. First I came thru like this. I loved the meaning on God. Keep up.
Thank you Ms. Kaur, I love Shiva and the great goddess Shakti and so much enjoyed writing it.
Am new to Poem Hunter. Have been reading a lot of poems recently and this poem was truly special. I teach poetry in high school and know fully well Palindrome poems are very hard to write. You have mirrored the poem with great skill.
Onishi-san, thank you for your wonderful comment. Welcome to PH, there are some very special poets here and you will enjoy reading them very much.
Toughest genre of poems to write, few flow so smoothly and well. I admit i had some googling to do, but it was worth the education. Both deep and spiritually significant.
With your Oxbridge credentials, you really had to look up who Shiva and Shakti are. Now, that is sad: -))
Each word so carefully chosen and so well placed. Beautiful poem.
Than you Steve, am glad you enjoyed. The palindrome poem is tough, but this one just happened in one sitting.
This is truly beautiful poetry. Shakti and Shiva so beautifully juxtaposed. I love the subject of your poem and it reads so smoothly. Perfect 10!
I have learnt all about shiva and shakti from you, so you are my Guru. I feel i had the grace of the goddess of poetry helping me with this one.: -))
Wow... Fantastic write where its reflection falls on mirror. Both the stanzas match with each other even if mirrored. I am seeing for the first time. Loved reading it.
Thanks Ms. Jayakumar for your kind words. I am so glad that you enjoyed reading it and more importantly for taking the time to comment on it,
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7/26/2025 11:48:15 PM # 1.0.0
wow, this is superb imagination and a wonderful poem.
Thank you sir, appreciate your comments for sure.