Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Cosmic Conciousness Comments

Rating: 5.0

a star,
before sleeping,
before budding itself
goes off...in oblivion
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ritty patnaik
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Bob Blackwell 27 August 2009

Ritty, this poem lives, it breathes it radiates itself to explain the meaning of our life. I loved it and will take it with me to read again and again. Bob

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Milica Franchi De Luri 19 August 2009

A star, moon, sun, sea, life, cosmos...........you covered the main ingredients that are contributing towards existence of all things- they are the power grater then ourselves....... well done Ritty, i enjoyed reading it...........Thank you! Milica

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Ejaz Khan 19 August 2009

Cosmic consciousness must be tremendous, beyond our comprehension. A deep write!

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